Hey there! This is the page of the Turtle Gang. Here we write down our adventures in science, both at school and during our field trip. We also teach concepts and lessons in science to educate young readers and to further educate the minds of adult readers. Our blog is meant for everyone, whether you are a girl or a boy if you are young or old. We would like to thank our teacher, Rye, who is our beloved Guru. He is the one who administered this activity for us to have fun. We, the "Hatchlings," that make up this, "Turtle Gang" are TinCan, Zefyron, Alphawolf, and Anonymous101. We wish you learn something from this blog! Thanks!
Zefyron
He is Zefyron, our administrator, he created this blog and prepared it for us. He is our adventurous writer and lead photographer. He is the one who took the photos in our field trip and searches photos in the internet when needed. He is a smart, fun-loving, daring adventurer!
This is Alphawolf, our lead editor. She corrects our wrong grammar or spelling in our blog posts. She also tells us what we should change, add, and remove. She also takes note of what the comments say and improve our blog when needed. She is a funny, artistic and very, very creative Internet Surfer!
Anonymous101
She is Anonymous101, she is our lead designer. She is in charge of formatting and designing our blog. She dazzles our blog into something known as a Work of Art. She is a creative, persevering and fun, fashionista!
He is TinCan, our blog poster. He is the one who edits the post that are to be posted. He is the one that finalizes the posts. He makes sure that everything is flawless and beautiful. (like his crush). He is a smart, kind and always fun to be with Math Master
"Ang hindi marunong lumingon sa pinanggalingan ay hindi makararating sa paroroonan"
-Tagalog Saying (For the hatchlings)
Photos By: Zefyron
Cowabunga Turtle Gang! Here is your score for your very first blog entry:
ReplyDeleteContent - 14/15
Coherence - 5/5
Creativity - 5/5
Voice - 5/5
Mechanics - 3/5
Text Layout - 4/5
Graphics & Multimedia - 5/5
Intellectual Honesty - 5/5
TOTAL: 46/50
Seems like you enjoyed writing your first blog entry! The post was well written and engaging. However, my eyes are very keen to text formatting. There were some typo errors I spotted. Please correct these ASAP. It was great to see also that you've used your own pictures. 'Til your next post!
That was AMAZING! I read the entire thing and I LOVED it! I'll be waiting for your next post!
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